Friday 23 August 2019

Sick Sentences

Sick Sentences

The ball came towards Richie. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited. It was up to him.

The ball zoomed towards Richie as he launched into the air, he held his arms out wide to catch the dashing oval shaped ball. Richie was exhausted but excited at the same time. It was up to him to score this try, come on Richie!
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4 comments:

  1. Nicole Mills28 August 2019 at 09:24

    Hi Joel. Wow what great sentences you have written. I really like how you described the ball zooming past Richie McCaw! I can here the excitement in your voice! Have you been to a rugby game before?

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    1. Anonymous28 August 2019 at 09:28

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    2. Anonymous28 August 2019 at 09:29

      Kia Ora Nicole, thank you for your comment. Yes I have been to a rugby game before, I went to the Highlanders vs Auckland game at Eden Park, last year.

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    3. Nicole Mills28 August 2019 at 21:03

      That would have been an exciting game! Go Auckland!!! What was the atmosphere like? Can you describe it for me?

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