Suddenly, John felt a swaying motion like there was an earthquake beneath his feet. As the swaying calmed down John wandered out of his house onto the mysterious swaying island. As he left the house John felt a rumble once again, suddenly the island started to swiftly glide along the water. John thought something was living underneath the island, so John decided to get his diving suit on and jump into the water. Splash, John was quick into the water, as John dived straight down he wacked his head on a humongous slimy fish. As John opened his eyes he saw the biggest eye in is life.
To be continued
Kia Ora my name is Asfan and I am from Room 23. I like your blog post about The Fish Island. I like how you had describe the John's emotions like, how big is The fish? You can describe more emotions of John or you can describe The fish more. Which fish is your favorite in the Pacific Ocean and the Atlantic Ocean.Thanks for sharing your learning.
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Asfan.
Faka Lahi Atu, My name is Ivan from Room 23. I really like your blog post about Fish Island. You described a lot of words and put in a lot of words. What fish do you think it is? I think it's a gigantic snapper. What lake or ocean do you think the fish is in? Thanks for posting your writing. Blog you later.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ivan, thank you for your comment.
DeleteI also think this humongous fish is a huge snapper.
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Joel